 | Viking Jam Jan 16 | Jonny Thompson P-Date: 2023 Genre: SciFi Review: What is hilarious about the advanced praise for this novel, is that they were all written by the same "pay for great reviews" company, Literary Titan. Much like Kirkus reviews you pay them to pump out raving one liners for advance marketing. Did the novel measure up to the paid liars parade? Let's find out! I really liked the premise of this novel. Floating city, cutting edge technology and the desire to move away from the normative political constructs that plague us. What sucked was the phrasing. Soft or softly was used in excess of 40x as was "wink". There were quite a few grammatical and continuity errors. The MC is a stoopid douche bag that denies the evidence he is currently living. Is anyone that oblivious? Nah. Also, within a day he has the hot billionaire wanting to jump his bones which is really not believable. Why would she give two fuks about Navy boy? The movement is good as are the supporting characters. The world building is what will draw you in. A solid 4-stars. Rating: 4.1/5 | | | |  | You can also reply to this email to leave a comment. | | | | |
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